Draft, Read, Revise, Edit, Repeat


I’ve just finished the first draft of my second novel and I’m fairly pleased with the result. Now it’s off to the beta readers, then more revision, then off to my critique partners, then more revision–and repeat.

I came across this Irving quote this morning as I was putting together a handout for the parents of my young writers club members and it sang to me on more than one level. Just like a novel, life is one great, unfinished manuscript, one that we spend a lot of time trying to perfect and never quite achieve. Unlike an actual manuscript, however, we can’t so easily erase our “shitty first drafts“.

But…we can revise. We can improve. We can choose better, stronger, kinder words, and show our feelings through action instead of dialogue. We can change our actions if they don’t ring true for our character. (Or for the character we wish to be.) We can cut out those characters who don’t bring value to our story, or worse, turn it into horror or tragedy. Likewise, we can give those quirky or unassuming characters a more prominent place in our plot. Maybe we can’t delete that first draft, but we can certainly go on to write a new one.

Life is full of plot points that go nowhere, subplots that take over our main theme, heroes and villains and spunky sidekicks that jump off the page–sometimes unexpectedly. Through it all, we keep on writing our story–living one moment after another, revising when necessary.

Happy Revising!


“Embrace the Suck”: Writing through the doubt

Moira-frustrated-computerI’ve often been told (and it’s advice I’ve passed on, myself) that if you are still long enough, you will hear God (or the Universe, or Fate, etc. etc.) speaking to you. I do believe that. Patience and calm will net you wisdom that you just cannot gleam from frenetic worrying and anxiety.

But there are also times when the Universe (or God, or Fate, etc. etc.) just ups and smacks you on the nose.

Take this morning for instance: I expressed to my husband how frustrated I was that I couldn’t translate the story in my head into coherent words on the paper for my current WIP. I was also second-guessing my finished novel, the one that I already submitted to two writing contests. I was feeling discouraged, to say the least.

And then this quote of the day popped up at the top of my Gmail inbox:

“My dear friend, clear your mind of cant.”― Samuel Johnson

To be perfectly clear, Johnson was not speaking of “can’t”; he was addressing the hypocritical way in which some people speak. (Politicians often cant about family values and fiscal responsibility, but then pass bills that promote neither.)

But as I read it in my head, I changed “cant” to “can’t”, because that advice also works. The more I stress over what I can’t do, the more true that becomes. If I tell myself I can’t do something, then I won’t be able to do it. I need to clear my mind of that awful word, “can’t”. Yes, I can develop a complex personality for my character. Yes, I can create a more vivid setting. Yes, I can figure out how to plug that plot hole.

I think as writers, we all have those moments of doubt, when we believe we can’t produce something worthy of public consumption. We just have to push through it, or to put it in military parlance, “Embrace the Suck”. If making the decision to chase my dream of becoming a published author has taught me anything, it’s taught me that this field is not for the faint of heart. It’s not for those who can’t be honest with themselves, who can’t handle the hard work, who can’t see past that first ugly draft. So just clear your minds of “can’t”, my dear friends, because:

“you can, you should, and if you’re brave enough to start, you will.”Stephen King


Simply having a wonderful noveling time…

(Apologies if you read the title of this post and now have McCartney’s “Wonderful Christmastime” stuck in your head. Actually, I’m not sorry. Because it’s been stuck in my head (thus the post title), so allow me to share the misery…)

Merry Christmas!

NaNoWriMo is over and I’ve met my 50K word count goal on Novel #2. Novel #1 is ready to be shipped to a professional editor, which means I get to start crafting query letters while I finish Novel #2. All this amidst making a special Christmas for my family of 9. (Husband, 4 small kids, & 3 grown-up stepchildren. Talk about a challenging gift list!)

My "Made with Code" Christmas Tree in honor of my beloved Miami Dolphins.

My “Made with Code” Christmas Tree in honor of my beloved Miami Dolphins.

But you know what? This is what I love. I love to find that perfect gift. I love when I miraculously craft the perfect sentence. I love to see my kids’ eyes light up when they see that Santa brought them the one thing they really wanted. I love when I get a flash of insight into what my characters really want or need, or the reason as to why they do the silly things they do. I love that we’re heading into playoff season for football, and it’s the exciting crunch time for my favorite teams. (#2 favorite Washington Redskins excepted; my hopes for them were dashed in week 5.) For me, this truly is the most wonderful time of the year. And being a writer–having the opportunity to explore my passion–why, it’s like Christmas every day!

This weekend, I cannot wait to settle down in my (somewhat garishly) decorated house, work on my novels, drink homemade eggnog (spiked for me, virgin for the kiddies), and cheer on my Miami Dolphins. (Sorry Baltimore, you may be the home team, but the Dolphins have my heart for always.) Now if I only had a house elf to rub my feet and cook dinner…